Darkness

Darkness kills me.......

Every night,

Darkness brings me back

 those haunted nights, when

tears coursed down my cheeks.

Something hurts

I do not know, either

those unforgettable memories,

or  the pain of cold shoulder,

ceasing me; each moment

it did hollow out me.

 

But, I wanna damp down,

relief  myself, but heart, just

want to weep and weep.

and  ease the pain in  my heart,

'cos cries  release pain out, and

That will mend a part of my heart.

Reviews

[Surya]

Haan, bleesing heart with aching words.
I wanna say a word, Just cry hell out of you, one day you will be relieved...It's a great energy pls dont waste it weeping all time, just for few days be a water tank and then move away swiftly and find who you are....
Coming to your poem, i felt it to heart...I loved it totally...:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Surya.....Yeah, right, I respect your words, friend... thank you once again.

[Surya]

It's my pleasure..:)

[Joey Nizz]

This poem brought back some memories I kept locked away, when left in the darkness, it all comes back, and the heart just has a different beat for each memory remembered, whether it was a memory of pain, or a memory of joy.

Thank you for sharing, good work :)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Joey for your kind review and visit. Memories always brings either pain or joy to us...It happens with me too. Thanks once again, friend.

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome, some memories are worth the keep and some are just harder than it sounds to forget.read moreYour welcome, some memories are worth the keep and some are just harder than it sounds to forget.
They say time heals and makes us forget.

[Priyanshi]

True...keep smiling.

[Psychotic Lily]

I just had a good cry from rethinking my life and I stumbled this upon in the dead of the night. Beautiful writing it truly expresses the pain we all want to heal

[Priyanshi]

True words, dear....Thank you so much, Lily....'m glad for your kind visit and review..

[Sofia]

A sad but superbly written write...i liked it a lot...keep it up!! You're quite talented...
I wish there was no pain in the world...but I know.. it's not possible...anyways keep writing!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much dear. I wish it could happen....Thanks for the appreciation, Sofia.

[Sofia]

You're welcome​ Priyanshi di!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Lovely, sad and beautiful poem. Memories released by the night..."ceasing me....it did hollow out me". Honest, emotional poem. Yes, tears are so important "cos cries release pain out and that will mend a part of my heart"- so let them out! Excellent.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so so much, dear, for your kind visit and review.... thanks once again for the appreciation.

[Abhishek Asthana]

darkness could be a better place wherein you could hide out your emotions...lay down in some unforgettable memories for a while but its not a soothing place to lead an entire life...
very gorgeously penned !!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Abhishek... 'm glad to know you liked it...and I agree with your kind words.

[Mamta Sonowal]

Such a beautiful poem. Well done keep writing dear...

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Mamta...Glad for your kind visit and review.

[Mamta Sonowal]

Ur most welc'me dear...

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is so heartbreaking. I relate to this so much and I really enjoyed reading this. thank you,

xoxo

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, dear....I'm glad that you could relate to it...thanks once again, xoxo.

[Maria]

I can feel pain and agony as well as sadness and heartache... Truly the night, tends to bring about much terror and nightmares as well...yet in the end, there will always be a light, in the midst of it all, that drive out the night. Loved this, and thank you for sharing.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you very much, friend....glad to know that you loved it...thanks for your kind visit and review.

[Maria]

You are welcomed and I look forward to reading more when I have time.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much.

[Maria]

Sure thing

[Wajiha Nayeem]

dark is my favorite too...just becuz nobody notices me when i cry and feel anything....i hate the lights these days...too bright and so disturbing they are....the darkness i feel is an amazing place where we can be ourselves without fearing about anything or anyone...we openly can cry out our emotions or also talk to the roof.....having a blank expression....i loved this poem...great one

[Priyanshi]

Thank you, dear, so so much......darkness hides everything, fear and agonies.
Thanks once again, Wajiha.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure is all mine...