Haan, bleesing heart with aching words.
I wanna say a word, Just cry hell out of you, one day you will be relieved...It's a great energy pls dont waste it weeping all time, just for few days be a water tank and then move away swiftly and find who you are....
Coming to your poem, i felt it to heart...I loved it totally...:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Surya.....Yeah, right, I respect your words, friend... thank you once again.
You've expressed "darkness" in a way that conveys a ton of feeling & even desperation. I'm not in favor of a message that's completely dark becuz I like showing contrasts -- everything in life has both black & white parts. But many writers often stick to the dark themes, and in this you have done a great job sounding original.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Hahaha..Thank you so much maam, for the honest review and visit...even i'm the one who stick to the .. read moreHahaha..Thank you so much maam, for the honest review and visit...even i'm the one who stick to the dark theme.
Very well written . . . short but very deep poetic lines . . i could easily feel each and every line . . . emotional one . . . but we have to overcome this
Lovely one
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Hey, thank you, so much pravir,, glad for your kind visit and review...
darkness is a funny thing. its intresting to me that to so many it brings about fear. I've always found the darkness too comforting. As though the day said , "you've made it this far, relax". The light is when all the ambitions and ideas come to action. terrifying.
Good writing
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, friend....glad for your kind visit and review.
Am a girl
who desires to travel a journey
from the dream world to the real world,
Livin' the beautiful dreams on the land of reality.
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