SMILE

SMILE

A Poem by Priyanshi

Be like a tree that goes vertically up,
And don't be a climber that needs support.
Be a star that brightens in the dark night,
And don't be  a reason for someone's  tears.
But be the reason for someone's smile.
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© 2017 Priyanshi


Author's Note

Priyanshi
collab. of me and my sweet little younger cousin,Madhu.....it's a try to bring smile to my friends.

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You brought a smile to my face reading this:)
I congratulate you and your younger brother!
Always smile!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hope

7 Years Ago

I am so sorry!
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

no no..don't be sorry...smile Neetha...it's OK it happens sometimes.
Hope

7 Years Ago

Yeah I will:)
Simple and very effective...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

Thank u dear so much......glad for your kind visit and review.
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome.
put a smile on my face,sweet colab

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, Wordman....glad to know that it brought smile to your face...Thank you so much for kind.. read more
 wordman

7 Years Ago

my pleasure
this is actually a very beautiful poem...i liked the way you used only a few sentences to define everything in here...nice work and yes, your sister could also become a writer!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

Right now she is sitting beside me, and she and me are so happy with your appreciating review..... read more
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Years Ago

hahha....that's always a pleasure dear!

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