SMILE

Be like a tree that goes vertically up,

And don't be a climber that needs support.

Be a star that brightens in the dark night,

And don't be  a reason for someone's  tears.

But be the reason for someone's smile.

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Author's Note

collab. of me and my sweet little younger cousin,Madhu.....it's a try to bring smile to my friends.

Reviews

[apennylate]

Be like a tree that shoot straight up... What a wonderful thing to say, haha... Made my day with this one... Nicely penned...

[Priyanshi]

Hey, thank you so much, Silente.....this poem made your day and your review made my day....thanks once again.

[apennylate]

Was a fun read, of course...

[Sanskrity Mishra]

A brief note..really pretty one...well done :)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much , dear....glad that you liked it.

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Welcome dear..

[mou]

be the reason of someone's smile and you will always get an unexpected dimple in your face..so sweet and cute write..very positive

[Priyanshi]

Hey , Thank you so much friend....bringing smile to someone can make us smile too.......thanks once again, dear.

[mou]

most welcome :)

[Psychotic Lily]

Quite a refreshing poem. Keep up the good work!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you dear, Lily so much....it means a lot to me....glad for your kind visit and review.

[Joey Nizz]

Always smile, even if things arnt going your way, because for those 2 seconds where you smiled will help you forget about everything thats bothering you even if it was for a couple of seconds.

This was a good read, thank you for writing :)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Joey..that's true..smile for a moment help us to forget for what we in tension.........am really glad for your kind visit and review....Keep smiling.

[Joey Nizz]

You are most welcome ^^

[pragya gaur]

Awesome one priyanshi Ji....loved it

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, dear...glad to know that you liked it....Once again thanks, Pragya.

[Abhishek Asthana]

so sweet,, looking forward to see some more of your collaborations like this... nicely written by two sisters

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Abhishek.... Yeah, we are trying hard to write another poem too... glad to know that you liked it...

[Suhd]

Nice try. You can do better.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you for kind visit and review...I'll try my best next time.

[Surya]

Yeah, be the reason for someone's smile....A sweet collaboration....I loved it...:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Surya.... really glad to know that you loved it....it was our first try even we are trying to work ore hard.

[Sofia]

Wonderful collab...I loved it dear..its just so simple nd beautiful..it brought a smile on my face..thnx for sharing nd spreading happiness..keep smiling nd keep writing...even ur cousin is gud in writing...😊

[Priyanshi]

Hahaha....that's always a pleasure, dear...glad to know that it brought smiles to your face.Thank you so much, Sofia.....you too be happy.

[Sofia]

Sure,😊 nd you're welcome