Today you are feeling sad and stressed. Feels like to apart from this world. But you have no idea that behind you, What's going on? Your mom awaiting to see that smile again. Sister is desiring to bring that smile again to your lips. Brother recalls past happy memories and dad finding the reason what did hit you? And you just lost in your world, Totally depressed and hurt. So just stand up and call up your memories, remember those people, who wanna see you smile again, at least smile for them, please It's a request...... SMILE AGAIN and bring COLORS to your life. Don't think everything has vanished and destroyed. Think, an opportunity is waiting for you, SO, Go and GRAB it and..... WIDEN YOUR SMILE
I dont know about others . . . but the last line really brought a smile on my face . . . truely motivating . . . veryyy simply written . . . i love this kind of writes where the deep emotions are described by such simple words . . . nice work priyanshi . . loved to read
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Pravir ...am glad for your kind visit and review....your review inspires me a lo.. read moreThank you so much, Pravir ...am glad for your kind visit and review....your review inspires me a lot....thanks a lot, friend.
It really brought a smile..i liked this poem very much..indeed! We should always be happy nd keep smiling..thnx for sharing the amazing poem😊..btw widen ur smile too..😀 keep smiling nd keep writing..
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7 Years Ago
This poem brought you a smile, and your review brought me a smile, ha ha ha.... I'll keep smiling, f.. read moreThis poem brought you a smile, and your review brought me a smile, ha ha ha.... I'll keep smiling, friend.
Thank you so much, dear Sofia.
Okay... this really touched my heart, since I'm feeling the depressed and hurt as well. An inspirational poem. Love it! I hope I can widen my smile as well and make sure it doesn't look fake.
Yeah there are reasons to be happy instead of sobbing over what's gone.....Truly an encouragement for your friend, I appreciate it...and I loves it...:)
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Surya....really glad to know that u loved it and once again thanks for appreciat.. read moreThank you so much, Surya....really glad to know that u loved it and once again thanks for appreciation.
Am a girl
who desires to travel a journey
from the dream world to the real world,
Livin' the beautiful dreams on the land of reality.
MY LINES-----
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