Today you are feeling sad and stressed. Feels like to apart from this world. But you have no idea that behind you, What's going on? Your mom awaiting to see that smile again. Sister is desiring to bring that smile again to your lips. Brother recalls past happy memories and dad finding the reason what did hit you? And you just lost in your world, Totally depressed and hurt. So just stand up and call up your memories, remember those people, who wanna see you smile again, at least smile for them, please It's a request...... SMILE AGAIN and bring COLORS to your life. Don't think everything has vanished and destroyed. Think, an opportunity is waiting for you, SO, Go and GRAB it and..... WIDEN YOUR SMILE
I dont know about others . . . but the last line really brought a smile on my face . . . truely motivating . . . veryyy simply written . . . i love this kind of writes where the deep emotions are described by such simple words . . . nice work priyanshi . . loved to read
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Pravir ...am glad for your kind visit and review....your review inspires me a lo.. read moreThank you so much, Pravir ...am glad for your kind visit and review....your review inspires me a lot....thanks a lot, friend.
I too believe we have many important bonds in our life.sometime one of them takes the highest position but we are loved and pampered by our family always..truly an understanding family specially parents are the most expensive gift that we achieved and no matter what they always protect and cherish us with all those unconditional love..completely melted by your those words where I find my journey too..profound write
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you....Family is an inseparable part of our body...they're the precious gift.
Thank you.. read moreThank you....Family is an inseparable part of our body...they're the precious gift.
Thank you so much for the lovely words.:))
Lovely, Happiness is always just round the corner all you need is a little more effort to find it. Wonderful. Looking forward to read more of your writing.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
True,Airafh....thank u so much for the lovely review...
Read my other works,I hope you'll lik.. read moreTrue,Airafh....thank u so much for the lovely review...
Read my other works,I hope you'll like them
I've can relate to what you've written. It so easy to let sadness take over, it takes so little energy, but happiness, that's a different story. The simple act of smiling so difficult, so painful. The love and support you express in your poem resonates as does your sincerity to help your friend.
Very moving, awesome work. Please keep writing!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much friend, for the lovely review and your kind words.
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True emotions always produce the best poetry! What a greater thing to do then smile and show gratitude for life. Life can get very difficult but we need to remember what’s important. This poem was a great reminder.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thanks a lot friend....you're absolute right...life will gradually will bring many obstacles, but th.. read moreThanks a lot friend....you're absolute right...life will gradually will bring many obstacles, but that doesn't mean, to sit at a place, instead, we must show the difficulties, how bravest we could have been in those situations too.
often it is really hard to smile...but memories of loved ones can cause us to smile...even if it is through the tears.
j.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
That's the truth...memories brings smiles too, on the other hand, they becomes the reason for our te.. read moreThat's the truth...memories brings smiles too, on the other hand, they becomes the reason for our tears also....but taking things positive, doesn't hurts you.
By the way, thank you sir, for the lovely review.
Any one would smile after reading it priyanshu ji I really loved it.... Was missing these since long
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Priyanshu?...hahaha...may be a mistake..anyway...Thank you dear so much...am really glad to see you .. read morePriyanshu?...hahaha...may be a mistake..anyway...Thank you dear so much...am really glad to see you after a long time.
Am a girl
who desires to travel a journey
from the dream world to the real world,
Livin' the beautiful dreams on the land of reality.
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