Guts Behind My Steps

Years  and years ago,

I was prisoned in a room:

with the loss of contentment,

away from beams of light

away from the dainty world.

restricted from the beautiful colors of the world

endowed with torment and suffering.

dealt with the pain

endured in anxiety.

Every minute I stressed upon 

the reason behind my sad 

stay in the world.

wished and longed 

for joy and contentment.

(11 years after )

Today I dwell in the world 

formulated by me,

crossing each barrier on that day

moved away to an awaiting 

and alluring life:

 A PARADISE formed 

in the fascinating world,

that includes me and my soul

with an aim  to attain 

the high positions of life,

it wants.

Reviews

[Rahul]

One of the aspiring poetry you've come up with. Everybody should have an aim of life which belongs to the purpose of one's destiny.. which further helps him reaching beyond success. Ev'n me either happen to know that as long as you don't have any aim or a purpose to life, you can't get yourself outta mind... which is so wrapped in some kinda thoughts full of hollowness. Taking initiate is must!

Enjoyed reading your poetry. Liked the way you mixed emotions with words. Totally marvelous!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so so much, Rahul... I am really too glad that you liked it.

[Psychotic Lily]

I love this work too. It just... you know... speaks to me. Beautifully written with raw emotion. Keep making masterpieces like these.

"dealt with the pain
endured in anxiety." my fave line

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, dear writer...really too glad to know that you loved it and once again thanks for appreciation.

[writ rajat]

very interesting to read it inspire many people

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much.I'm glad to know that you liked it

[Hope]

It is an aspiring work, dear:)
It shows courage and the will to move forward!
A powerful poem indeed!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Neetha. I'm really too glad to know that you liked it.

[Hope]

Always a pleasure

[Great Aunt Astri]

A heart felt and moving poem. Moving away from the 'torment and suffering' to 'the fascinating world that includes me and my soul' Lovely concept. It is an aim many of us aspire to! Wonderful poem.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Great Aunt Astri. I am so glad for your kind visit and review.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Suffering is a major part of life, i like this whole poem and that images helped really well though..beautiful write.
Keep going

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much , Farhan .I'm glad that you liked the poem

[Pravir]

Life's struggle encrypted beautifully . . . from the fall to the rise . . . its a journey which everyone one should move on and on till the brim . . . nice work

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Pravir.

[Surya]

Suffered and raised..That's what life is...face anything...I loved it...:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much Surya, for your kind visit .

[Raj Sahu]

Really a stressful poem! Everyone's life is somewhat in the clutch of stress and he/she wants to get rid of it. Everyone is wanting a Messiah or a Saviour to get relief from all the pains. Very well written! Congratulations! We expect such more from you dear poetess.😊😊😊

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much Raj .Yes.... very true... and once again thank you for understanding the motive behind the poem.

[Raj Sahu]

The pleasure is mine.