Friend and Enemy

Its about people when they are friends and at the other time turn to be enemy. Please put some review.

I had a friend,

with whom I shared

emotions 

accessories

thoughts

 happiness

 anxiousness.

                   Last year, I broke up

                   with her and today 

                   we share-

                   hatred

                   violence

                   partition

                   jealousy

                   and emotions.

Author's Note

Please let me know how it was . Put reviews.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Quite interesting! Liked the way you put reality into words. It's true that what we love the most do hate the most with time. Friends become enemies... not to hurt you down, but to teach you another chapter of life. I kinda love this poetry.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Rahul. I'm very glad that you liked it.

[Sofia]

It portrayed how time changes everyone. One day, we're friends, the other day we're enemies. Its so true!! It hurts when our friends turn up against us...Above all, this was a well written one..

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Sofia for your kind visit and review

[Sofia]

You're welcome..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is so true and right...really, a friend who turns into an enemy becomes the worst situation....and yes,this is something i could relate to.
wonderful....

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Wajiha. I'm really glad that you liked it .

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure...

[Hope]

Its true....
A friend who turns into an enemy is never really a friend........
Well expressed poem, Priyanshi.....

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much for your kind review.

[Hope]

Always my pleasure...

[Raj Sahu]

Oh! Really it shows two faces of time. The good time fills with positive feelings whereas the bad fills with negative.
In our life friends leaves us when we need them most and it is truly painful.
It is a sad poem. I like it.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much , Raj. It really hurts the most when you need friends and they walk away from you. Once again thanks for understanding it.

[Raj Sahu]

The pleasure is mine. 😊😊