Crumbs in a Giant's Pocket.

Crumbs in a Giant's Pocket.

A Poem by Priyanka Natesh
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Just another possibility!

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     In an immeasurable space,
            in a live blue ball,
               on a chunk of land,
                  in a small country,
                     in a tiny locality,
                        as a minute speck,
                             I reside.

                            Should this living spot
      have anything to worry?
     This life, I own,
                       I enjoy, I complete.

© 2013 Priyanka Natesh


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You view on life is logically in this poem. What is the worth of one human being? I like the story of when a beggar came to the door. The kid woman offer food and a place to stay warm. She had little. Her heart gave with kindness and no regret. The man was Jesus. He blessed her life and she never lack anything again. Thank you for a excellent poem. Made old Coyote think.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Cool yaa..!!!!! Lovely words..!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the brevity of this piece. It accents the flow and forces the reader to seek a deeper meaning for the poem. We should all take a moment to view ourselves in this way for some fail to realize that we are just a tiny piece of a huge machine. All that we should seek is simple serenity. Very well penned

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's simple. Not too wordy, but still it contains depth. Curiously, is there a reason you chose the structure? I like it, but it's unlike anything I've ever attempted to do. Intriguing. I enjoyed this :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the structure

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting pattern. It has deep meanings. Nicely written. I enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it - really intriguing. I love how you first belittle your life, before showing its true worth in those last four lines. I loved it, well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You view on life is logically in this poem. What is the worth of one human being? I like the story of when a beggar came to the door. The kid woman offer food and a place to stay warm. She had little. Her heart gave with kindness and no regret. The man was Jesus. He blessed her life and she never lack anything again. Thank you for a excellent poem. Made old Coyote think.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the answer to this question - all life has value. Great writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the structure and very deep :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 24, 2011
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Priyanka Natesh

Hyderabad, India



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Hello there! I'm Priyanka, a dreamer's soul, a Pisces incarnate ( ;) ), with endless aims and endless aspirations. I'm here to give a voice to my emotions, to get in touch with my true being, to me.. more..

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