Crumbs in a Giant's Pocket.

Crumbs in a Giant's Pocket.

A Poem by Priyanka Natesh
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Just another possibility!

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     In an immeasurable space,
            in a live blue ball,
               on a chunk of land,
                  in a small country,
                     in a tiny locality,
                        as a minute speck,
                             I reside.

                            Should this living spot
      have anything to worry?
     This life, I own,
                       I enjoy, I complete.

© 2013 Priyanka Natesh


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You view on life is logically in this poem. What is the worth of one human being? I like the story of when a beggar came to the door. The kid woman offer food and a place to stay warm. She had little. Her heart gave with kindness and no regret. The man was Jesus. He blessed her life and she never lack anything again. Thank you for a excellent poem. Made old Coyote think.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Don't know why, but reading this was a relief for me... Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting Title.
We are all really just so; yet without our being a speck it changes the world in it's entirety.


Posted 11 Years Ago


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Priyanka Natesh

11 Years Ago

Definitely :) The speck matters more than anything else. Thank you for the review!
My Dear Writing Friend,
I believe this to be one of the best poems I have ever pondered. With just forty-four words you have summed up how small we really are and gratitude bigger than the universe. I am truly impressed.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanka Natesh

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the wonderful review :)
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amen

Posted 13 Years Ago


Familiar.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is what life is all about... Lovely write... Great job...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Seen from far above I am nothing but a small speck of dirt, I tend to remind myself that....you put this in very well in words. Nice work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Home is where the heart lives. Need more be said.

Good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


great concept
excellent form
terrific imagery
wonderful write
allen

Posted 13 Years Ago


I enjoy this spot I reside in, my tiny speck of the world. Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Priyanka Natesh
Priyanka Natesh

Hyderabad, India



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Hello there! I'm Priyanka, a dreamer's soul, a Pisces incarnate ( ;) ), with endless aims and endless aspirations. I'm here to give a voice to my emotions, to get in touch with my true being, to me.. more..

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