Crumbs in a Giant's Pocket.

Just another possibility!

     In an immeasurable space,
            in a live blue ball,
               on a chunk of land,
                  in a small country,
                     in a tiny locality,
                        as a minute speck,
                             I reside.

                            Should this living spot
      have anything to worry?
     This life, I own,
                       I enjoy, I complete.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You view on life is logically in this poem. What is the worth of one human being? I like the story of when a beggar came to the door. The kid woman offer food and a place to stay warm. She had little. Her heart gave with kindness and no regret. The man was Jesus. He blessed her life and she never lack anything again. Thank you for a excellent poem. Made old Coyote think.
Coyote

[Writer #00]

Don't know why, but reading this was a relief for me... Thanks for sharing.

[Constance Payne]

Interesting Title.
We are all really just so; yet without our being a speck it changes the world in it's entirety.

[Priyanka Natesh]

Definitely :) The speck matters more than anything else. Thank you for the review!

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
I believe this to be one of the best poems I have ever pondered. With just forty-four words you have summed up how small we really are and gratitude bigger than the universe. I am truly impressed.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Priyanka Natesh]

Thank you for the wonderful review :)

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amen

[Vrushali]

Familiar.

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is what life is all about... Lovely write... Great job...

[Sukriti Suki]

Seen from far above I am nothing but a small speck of dirt, I tend to remind myself that....you put this in very well in words. Nice work!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Home is where the heart lives. Need more be said.

Good work.

[Allen Smuckler]

great concept
excellent form
terrific imagery
wonderful write
allen

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I enjoy this spot I reside in, my tiny speck of the world. Beautiful!