Alternate Lover.

This one is a dedication to my thickest friend, who I don't want to lose.. ;)

Oh! My sweet love!
have I kept you in the dark?
But the truth never shies, and
I loved you from the start
You are my Prince!
in my parallel life, yes!
In castles we would adorn
our love in brocades
Laugh, embrace
Oh! A pair we would be
Alas! I realize
I am stuck in the present
wishing to skip to the parallel
where you would be mine..

Reviews

[Kathryn]

Love it :)

[theopenbook]

wow :) so simple and true:) i love it:)

[Ripple of Aqua]

Deffinetly an image probing piece. The way that you express it is almost as if you were speaking in a mirror trying to tell him. Such wistful longing.

[Derek S.Keck]

This is outstanding! What makes it so great is how relatable it is to the human experience. We've all traveled down that road of love, never quite getting the chance to hop the fence and get what we want and desire the most. Lovely piece!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Laugh embrace......I loved you from the start...........I am stuck in the present and wishing to skip to you..............and then you would be mine.......sweet!

[Coyote Poetry]

Good friends are few. Best to keep them close and be thankful for them. I like the kind and gentle words in this poem. A strong ending to a beautiful and outstanding poem.
Coyote