Alternate Lover.

This one is a dedication to my thickest friend, who I don't want to lose.. ;)

Oh! My sweet love!
have I kept you in the dark?
But the truth never shies, and
I loved you from the start
You are my Prince!
in my parallel life, yes!
In castles we would adorn
our love in brocades
Laugh, embrace
Oh! A pair we would be
Alas! I realize
I am stuck in the present
wishing to skip to the parallel
where you would be mine..

Reviews

[V.J.C.]

:D, nice works.

[Arielle Ann]

Aah do I sense a connection? yes I do..."Alas! I realize
I am stuck in the present
wishing to skip to the parallel "- as per my comprehension people would take this negative; I mean the two feet in two boats thing ;)! but I understand this completely my dear (I mean if I got you correctly of course! )

[K.C. Zbryk]

The sentiment is wonderful and saddening at the same time. Great write!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So love this loving piece, great work :)

[Dushyant Thadani]

Wow!!! I love this concept, even though I hate it so much... Your love will be there in this world itself... So don't lose hope... The guy is already here... Trust me on that...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Great work...!!!!

[Sakib]

Really nice!!I liked the words and the whole images. Great job

[Lily Mae]

"I am stuck in the present
wishing to skip to the parallel
where you would be mine.."

This is excellent.. I love the way you penned these emotions and thoughts..xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

I like this work. Short and to the point, like a shovel upside the head.

[Sukriti Suki]

I like this...the way it is written, the flow....Nice work.