Step Out the Threshold.
A Poem by
Priyanka Natesh
Walk,
Out of home
Out of certainty
On your own
Brace,
The vengeance
The crudeness
All alone
Find,
The soul
The life
You own
Enjoy,
The quiet
The peace
You deserve
Kiss,
Love
Surrender
Together.
© 2013 Priyanka Natesh
Reviews
this is full of great feeling and peace great write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
A amazing poem. The few words create a powerful poem with so much hope and possibility. I like the last four words.
"Kiss,
Love
Surrender
Together. "
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A amazing poem. The few words create a powerful poem with so much hope and possibility. I like the last four words.
"Kiss,
Love
Surrender
Together. "
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
unorthodox at its best :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
unorthodox at its best :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
yeah this is really inspirational:) so nice and gives a wonderful feeling after reading it:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
yeah this is really inspirational:) so nice and gives a wonderful feeling after reading it:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nice work. This is inspirational.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice work. This is inspirational.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love the way you've written this too. Beautiful flow and a lovely optimistic ending to it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love the way you've written this too. Beautiful flow and a lovely optimistic ending to it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Quite intriguing. Interesting writing scheme.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Quite intriguing. Interesting writing scheme.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Good show..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Good show..!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 17, 2011
Last Updated on June 27, 2013
Author
Priyanka Natesh Hyderabad, India
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Hello there!
I'm Priyanka, a dreamer's soul, a Pisces incarnate ( ;) ), with endless aims and endless aspirations. I'm here to give a voice to my emotions, to get in touch with my true being, to me..
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