Lasting Impressions..

It's the loveliest feeling,

the transition from acquaintances to friends..

The feeling  of having earned a part of another person's thoughts..

A person miles away,who still thinks of you.

One of destiny's vicissitudes...

two tiny dots connecting despite the distance..

Happiness!

Reviews

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[RG]

Beautiful write! I know the joy one feels when one knows there is someone somewhere who thinks about us, is worried for us, wishes us to get best in life. At times even the people beside us can't give us this wonderful feeling what a distant person can do. Happiness!

[Mohammed]

:) luv it!!

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is one amazing write... I know the feeling... I had a similar one with a very very deep connection... GREAT JOB!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Need friends in many places. Never know when we will need each other. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!

[bonbon7810]

I liked this poem a lot! Thanks for sharing, I loved the vocabulary. It sounded intelligent, yet creative.

[Vaidehi]

" One of destiny's vicissitudes...
two tiny dots connecting despite the distance.."

Just loved those lines!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Short and stark, love and happiness are sharp and to the point just like your writing, well done.