Poor Little Souls!

Poor Little Souls!

A Poem by Priyanka Natesh

Happy,crazy,grim,sad,
These little emotions do drive me mad!

Happy now i am,walking through the mall,
Until i tripped and fell,causing utter pell-mell!

Anger,anguish mixed with chagrin
Swiftly made me flush with a "S**t! What a mess i am in!"

Sitting in the classroom looking into his broken eyes,
As besotted as i was,could think of only his smoldering voice

Love struck supremely when he said "I love you"
Utterly crazy when he said "I miss you"
Tempestuous, oh yes! when he said "Er..well,not quite!"
A dreary-eyed insomniac when i said "I hate you!"

Ecstatic,gloomy,lunatic,macabre,
Solemn,cocky,modern,conventional!

I pity thy heart for it tackles these emotions
Which mutate so fast like the waves of an ECG!

At the moment i feel simply blissful
Cos talking of emotions has made me emotionally emotive! 

© 2010 Priyanka Natesh


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spectacular! The articulations are well-crafted. Good work Priyanka!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good work..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way you set-up the poem. Each set of lines with a different feel. I entertaining poem to read. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My favorite part is the first line:

Happy,crazy,grim,sad,
These little emotions do drive me mad!

Emotions really can make you crazy sometimes, can't they? :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Priyanka Natesh

Hyderabad, India



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Hello there! I'm Priyanka, a dreamer's soul, a Pisces incarnate ( ;) ), with endless aims and endless aspirations. I'm here to give a voice to my emotions, to get in touch with my true being, to me.. more..

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