EXPLOSION!

EXPLOSION!

A Poem by Priyanka Natesh
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When you want that inner beast in you, to break through the shackles of the materialistic world and LIVE!

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The spark of a thought

Splintering through banality

Striking at the trite and the musty

Burning with passion

Beatifying the soul

Enveloping her senses

Rising above… above the unoriginal…

Flourishing ink on paper

Fireworks! Colors! Van Gogh! Mozart!

Devouring fantasies! Threadbare relics!

Cherry blossoms! Intoxication!

Expressions! Gestures!

PROMISES! ACHIEVEMENTS!

LOVE! PASSION!

ECSTASY! REDEMPTION!

LIFE!

Sprint through the banality

Plastic and caustic

 

Don’t wish for more

Than to live a day of truth

© 2015 Priyanka Natesh


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great..
a firework of thoughts..
smorgasbord of emotions..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Powerful use of words.
"Cherry blossoms! Intoxication!
Expressions! Gestures!
PROMISES! ACHIEVEMENTS!
LOVE! PASSION!
ECSTASY! REDEMPTION!
LIFE!"
The above lines needed and to be understood. A restless mind need to learn and improve. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your words are so filled with explosive power to the senses, to the spirit. So much drifts and flows around us, and too often we are blind to anything but the mundane. You made me ponder artists and creative lives that touch us still, even after endless ages, and I wonder what lived in them, what beautiful beast gave them eyes to see the world in all its wonder. I know you only a little, dear Priyanka, but it is enough to know you have a soul on fire. So for the sake of the world, please let yourself be consumed in its flames and let us walk in the light of you. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


To see the spiritual reality, we must have pure hearts and minds with honesty to seek the truth and redemption from the chaos and needs of the materialistic world. An excellent and honest write...:)................

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanka Natesh

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for understanding :)
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...:)...

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Priyanka Natesh
Priyanka Natesh

Hyderabad, India



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Hello there! I'm Priyanka, a dreamer's soul, a Pisces incarnate ( ;) ), with endless aims and endless aspirations. I'm here to give a voice to my emotions, to get in touch with my true being, to me.. more..

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