Fading Phases

Somewhere between being a half baked adolescent and a fresh adult, we miss naivety

Where has the silence gone

That wafted and filled the empty heart with sheen

Where have the thoughts fled

That oozed and simmered the energy so

Where the emotion

Of inexplicable ecstasy

Where the essence of purity

When all that remains is tainted actions

Whence did love change me so

Whence did age deter me so

 

I long for the soul to quiver again

With emotion sublime

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Dear Priyanka, this is so beautifully moving. It holds the bittersweet aching of life flowing past us... around us... yet somehow leaving us empty within. May this pure joy find itself growing within you like a wild garden... May you find the balance of living and loving... and yes, a soul quivering with an ocean of euphoric peace. It can be... and will be for you... I promise.

[Priyanka Natesh]

Mr Froman!! Oh your words and wishes mean so much to me. Thank you for the support :)

[An owl on the moon]

It is my joy and honor to travel with you on this journey of light... :)

[Paavana Varma]

Beautiful piece.It really did move me! Keep on writing.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow..
Change is the name of life..
Your words, touched me to the core..
I loved the idea conveyed..

Enjoyed it.!

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand the poem.
"I long for the soul to quiver again
With emotion sublime"
Longing for things lost leave us wishing for old days and the emotion of new. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Priyanka Natesh]

Thank you so much Sir :) I am so glad you understand

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Dushyant Thadani]

I wish I had words to put forth to show the extent that this poem moved me. It truly relates to me. It's been a while since I have been here and yours was the first poem I clicked on. I was glad I did :)

[Priyanka Natesh]

Dushyant! Well I am glad too :) Thank you