Amber & Blue

With few, you are just like oil on water.

                             Amber& Blue

Have you ever noticed

amber never merges with blue

or purple or violet for that matter.

Amber is fake

amber is out of place

Blue is royal

rich

original

itself

Blue turns purple purple turns navy.

Amber stays amber. Maybe a tad brighter

Blue is ancient blue is life

amber is garish

Stark  

Man made

Jarring.

I like blue. Not so much amber

Maybe that’s why it’s true

amber never merges with blue.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Amber's're blue whatttt ever you do, no one's gonna die...
well written, this writin' is good to read, Amber's n Ember's both have their own identity n entity...you memorized about this...
it's a nice way to writin', everynight i go outside n just look at the sky in night time, when star's twinkle. Amber's...!! Your this one words is awesome...
well written once again,
good luck for your next lovely writin'.

[Priyanka Natesh]

Thank you for the review :)

[Vrushali]

Woah! This one's--something.

Just so extraordinary!

[Writer #00]

I find it ironic that the color that is fake is the one that remains itself and doesn't fluctuate. I suppose constants in life are mechanical and unreal. Nice poem.

Hmm.../100

[Priyanka Natesh]

Thank you :). It was a jarring streetlight that inspired this one; unexpectedly metaphoric too.

[Writer #00]

Was it the streetlight in the picture?

[Priyanka Natesh]

Not that same one. I got that one off the internet. But a similar one inspired me, yes :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Interesting..!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interest poem. I'm a terrible artist. Colors are the same to my eyes. I like the description and your thoughts in the poem. Thank you for sharing the very good poem.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

nice work on this poem...

[Pratik]

Interesting write! You have used colors to depict the difference between artificiality and something that's natural! Nice take on the subject!