The Night I Met God........but not as you know him..

The Night I Met God........but not as you know him..

A Story by Jude Green
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A short chapter of one mans journey into his night of ectacsy...

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The Night I Met God

...but not as you know him.

 

What a feeling!

It's hard to explain what it's like unless you have been there yourself. The scene is set, it's a Friday night. There you stand in a line waiting to go in. The weather warm, the moon shining brightly overhead like floodlights at a football match, the air thick with smells of perfume, aftershave, chat and smoke and untold unrecognizable smells. Your heart starting to pick up pace while you try and keep a conversation going, knowing your not really listening as your mind and ears are tuned into the hum of the music radiating from inside the building..The line moves a little closer.., the feelings inside your body becoming more aroused, not long now. What's that warm feeling enveloping your consciousness? "your coming up at last, about time, you took them nearly half an hour ago." My chins trembling, this is going to be a great night i can feel it. My legs are turning into jelly, my vision just starting to blur, my ears finely tuned as that of a dog. The music seems louder but it's not, it;s your altered state of mind tuning into the REAL world. We move again, were nearer the door. I have got to get in before i explode, before my head takes off like a rocket. " My God , what a feeling" my spine tingling as if ice cold water has been poured down it.."O Jesus" Were in, I'm paying the girl so that i can enter another chapter into my journey. People are all around me coming and going, door's open and shut, the music loud then louder. Monitors above the door showing the entrance and the line of Friday Night Church Worshipers coming to dance to their God "E""Go on get inside" i say to myself then louder so as everyone can hear me. My friends call me to follow, everyone of us our chins trembling, our hearts beating a million beats a second, our skin moving across our bodies like a swarm of bees...."S**t, I'm here!" the music so loud it hits me like a force ten gale. Bodies, thousands of bodies moving to OUR God's music, praying and offering themselves as sacrifice to this His night. " I can't think! I don't want to think! Why think? Just enjoy the ride, close your eyes and feel the pulse of a generation crashing through your veins.". Louder, louder the music pumps, bodies jump and move in unison, light's flash the faces of people in front of your eyes, everyone your friend, everyone you know..... My leg's...What's happening?... They are moving on their own. Now it rises up my body, i have no control of what is happening..."Don't worry silly, it's the vibe, the buzz,the music,...it's life." You can't stop yourself, you move left then right, it's got you!..."Don't fight it, go with it, ride the wave..." I feel orgasmic......."F*** what a way to feel!.. i defy anyone on this planet to dismiss this feeling; to dirty the ride, the buzz it gives. People are just scared of things that they know nothing or little about."...MY God is a just god; He alters My mind, My soul, My body. He provides music for Me to worship, he gives Me friends to be with and a place to worship, and i dare you to try and take this from me. Bodies press into mine, the wave of people move around me like a hectic sea. The friends i came with are by my side....we smile at each other, lock hands. Jumping....Swimming...Twisting...Boom!...Boom!..Boom! The music crashes through my unconsciousness." F***in YES...Go on my son! What a f***in tune!"...I'm here, I'm in heaven, my bodies not my own, i feel like I'm my soul floating above everyone, watching the night and my body unfold.  "Water, i need water that's it!"...i tap the person in front of me who i see has water, i don't know her but we are all brothers and sisters here. I motion i need a drink and her chewing , smiling face offers me the bottle. I take it but swallow deeply, slowly..."Nectar, F***ing Nectar" I feel every last drop gush down my throat and hit the pit of my stomach then explode. I make eye contact and smile, handing the bottle back. She's beautiful, no words could describe her beauty. I lock arms with her, friends join us and together we move, flinging out bodies on to the rocks of music. "You need more, go on take one!" My eyesight gliding over the room, round and round and round. My mouth opens, GONE.... I've answered my call, my body and mind challenged me and I've for filled that challenge. My Body convulses a little as they hit the bottom of my empty stomach, my spine crawls. 5 minutes, 10 minutes....BANG. "Holy s**t yes! Take me, take my body and mind, I'm off my head!" The room whirls, my sight blurred, sweat running down my forehead and the nape of my neck and down along my spine, i shiver. My body moves with the music, attacking me from every angle.."I f***in love it", my mind explodes, can't stop moving. I'm the music's puppet; the music is My Master. My God "E" has shown ME " The Promised Land" I'm yours, take me,take me, do with me what you must. Jumping, Moving, Dancing, my energy levels at 1000%. Come on World try and stop me. Music everywhere, bodies, sweaty bodies heaving together in a sea of euphoria, everyone my friend, i love everyone! This is what life is all about, this feeling, this buzz. Dance boy, dance till your feet can't stop. She's there again by your side, chewing and smiling as before but with lust and rawness burnt into her eyes, the music and the night etched into her face. She otters me the water again, my hand grabs at the plastic bottle containing the cold clear liquid. I place it to my parched mouth, gulping greedily as i drain the elixir of life. I pass the bottle back, the whole exchange taking place without our bodies stopping dancing. My body does as it wants, never tiring, never losing a fraction of energy.... I never want this night to end, I never want to leave, The music must never stop............

© 2008 Jude Green


Author's Note

Jude Green
If you do read it please excuse any bad spelling and grammer.....i would also appreciate it if you would leave comment or reviews if you have taken the trouble to read it....thanks all...

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Oh my...

This was so discriptive and interesting! It was not at all what I expected!

I could feel and hear your words. The scene you created was so realistic.

I think if you fixed it up, it would be even more enjoyable to read.

Wonderful job. :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

Posted 15 Years Ago



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