Dolls In The Attic

Dolls In The Attic

A Poem by Tom Friel

 

Dolls in the attic
Rocking chairs that move
Old records begin to play
Creaky stairs, dogs that fight
A farmer bailing hay
Candles in the air
A full-length mirror
 
You know, someone’s near
 
A chandelier, a treasure chest
Old letters bring a tear
A dried corsage, a wedding dress
A tuxedo stained with beer
Mischievous deeds, angry thoughts
Time has stopped for someone here
Eerie lights, cats that hide
 
You know, someone’s near
 
Worn out jeans, broken screens
Acres painted in shades of green
A soul still clinging, softly singing
Bible hymns from a worn out swing
A rusty gate, a hellish wait
Skies above filled with tears
A moonless night, an endless plight
 
You know, someone’s near
 
A broken vase, ones fall from grace
Silence is the scream
Hungry eyes, woeful cries
The dinner bell suddenly rings
Rotted pies, death has lied
You know I've had my fill
Here I am, where are you?
 

My love for you is still

© 2008 Tom Friel


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This was amazing!!!
It was so suspenseful and I couldn't take my eyes off the page.
I love the title as well. It gives such an eerie feel to the poem.
Excellent work.
Very creative.

-Elissa :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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