Dolls In The Attic

Dolls In The Attic

A Poem by Tom Friel

Dolls in the attic
Rocking chairs that move
Old records begin to play
Creaky stairs, dogs that fight
A farmer bailing hay
Candles in the air
A full length mirror

 

You know, there’s someone there

 

A chandelier, a treasure chest
Old letters bring a tear
A dried corsage, a wedding dress
A tuxedo stained with beer
Mischievous deeds, angry thoughts
So much time still living here
Eerie lights, dogs that hide

 

You know, what it is they fear

 

Broken dreams, broken screens
Acres shaded green
Skies above heavy with tears
Children share a worn out swing
Softly singing, souls still clinging
Staring stoically, from the  mirror
A rusty gate, a hellish wait

 

You know, with night walks fear

 

A broken vase, an empty face
Silence becomes the scream
Damn this house, damn this place
The dinner bell begins to ring
Beady eyes, rats and flies
Old dolls begin to blink
Languished hearts, tormented souls

 

You know, you're on the brink

 

© 2008 Tom Friel


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love it!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


NICE! I like the tone of this poem he rhythm is nicely done and i love the use of rhyme... very well done!

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago



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