Broken Glass

so much for promises

 

laying with lies you feel
the maddening madescent
the moist malaise 
the metamorphosis
that's all to real

too ashamed to look  
into the mirror and see 
what they see

for they see nothing
and you feel nothing
and others walk by you
as if nothing's happened

from unsightly to blind
as if you welcome it
deserve it, need it
like a good confession
 
    oh....                   
               to hell with it

Reviews

[J. James Reider]

I think this is a very well crafted piece... you used some powerful words to create illuminating images without using alot of words... good write!