An Illusion

An Illusion

A Poem by Tom Friel

It was
             An illusion

A flesh and blood illusion
A walking talking illusion
A one-of-a-kind illusion

             An illusion

Filled with hopes
Filled with dreams
Filled with goals

            An illusion

One could hold
One could want
One could love

            An illusion

It was

© 2008 Tom Friel


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nice rhythm and pattern. good write

Posted 17 Years Ago



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