Give

Give me a spike to drive through my heart,

as I drift from this realm,

being torn apart.

The demons,

they rise,

cackling,

as my hands are shackled,

and my ankles are ripped from me....

Dare to be the soft feathers to cushion this fall.

As the vodka hovers,

breeding,

toxic seeping, deep into my blood stream.

Let me wander a bit in the hell,

where echoes fall deaf,

and I can not stand still....

Writhing in agony,

only knees to steady me.....

Reviews

[Revery]

There is a route to healing that sometimes takes us lower before it takes us to a better place. Don't linger for a moment dear friend, hit the bottom of the ground with the ferocity I know you are capable of and then come back to that place of strength.

For you?

Yes, for you, but also to send the

MESSAGE TO YOUR DEMONS TO F**K OFF! LIVE STRONG TO SPITE THEM!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Thank you:) I will and you are such a dear friend:)

[roy mccarthy]

revery is a serious cheese-ball

[Priscilla Sayers]

Yeah, he's mad about something, I guess....

[An owl on the moon]

The dark music rises in your heart's strong echoes here... the strumming, stirring images of the angst that cannot quite be voiced... deeper than mere words... Know you may freely wander, dear poet, but that your friends will never let your shadow grow too distant down hell's hallways...

[Priscilla Sayers]

Thank you Craig, my sweet poet. Love to you.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a difficult piece for me to read, there should be a warning for sisters.

Having said that, you can truly convey an excruciating pain within your writes, and this tears at the seams. So POWERFULLY written, it hurts.

[Priscilla Sayers]

I'm Sorry, my sweet sister. I forgot to warn you. Yet, you already knew where I was when I wrote this....
You are always my first call for help! I love you:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

True, but your title didn't give me a hint, and your writes vary in theme... I thought this was going to be one of your sensual writes. Boy did you fool me girl! :P

[Tree]

The writer who is willing to journey into places that others won't come back
broken, unclean, –––exhausted... But richer in knowledge and wisdom,
for having traveled in the first place. I enjoy reading you.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Thank you, I enjoy your reviews:)

[Tate Morgan]

We all have Hell to pay in the end I say we vacation in heaven for the climate and live in hell for the company

[Priscilla Sayers]

Thank you sweet Tate:) Wise words...

[Tate Morgan]

One foot in heaven one foot in hell thats me

[Priscilla Sayers]

:) Lean to Heaven

[Tate Morgan]

well i dont know Im real fond of some of the company there.I like the characters in hell better '

[Marie]

This is raw, dire stuff...

[Priscilla Sayers]

Yes. Very:) Thank you.