The She-Devil Visit

My uncle and aunt came for a visit. my uncle left to the store to get soda to drink.Thinking that it was my uncle at the door instead it was the she-devil.
Skinny and thin wearing a jean jacket.
She tried to get in
Ripping up the Halloween decoration on my door.
while she is continues to destroy my decoration,she screaming for her man and her meat saying I stole them.
pushing her way into my home.
my aunt trying her best to help me get this she-devil out.
I saw that she had poisons in her body was insisting that this was her home.
finally we won the she-devil walked away saying i have her man and her bags of meat.
But did i really won, I now fear to leave my home today.
the police no help
couldn't write down any information down
because they forgot there writing pads.
I call my sage.
The sage angry for what had happen can't leave his work to be by my side
We all thank The Lord the children was not home.
My Aunt and Uncle made sure i was OK and left for home.
So today I stay home waiting for my family to come home.
Scared that the she-devil will return to try to get her man and her meat that is not here.


 

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Darn she devils they can really be a pain. Liked this poem, nice write.

[Pakino]

There is a bit of a grammar issue in the poem. Not sure if you wanted to ignore the rhythm style of poem's. The idea is present however if you fix up the grammar etc it will be better.