You look good but you could be thinner

You look good but you could be thinner

A Poem by Belinda Arcelay

I lost some weight by cutting down on snacks,eating the right foods and walking more.
I felt great but a snake charmer came and said you look good but you could be thinner.
Maybe you shouldn't eat breakfast.
Take this......... It will help you lose more weight .
Don't eat that hamburger eat this fish sandwich instead.
You know, you could lose more weight if you eat only one meal a day.
The snake charmer so handsome and thin or so i once thought was nothing but a venomous viper.
You keep feeding me poison .
Until one day so sick , so weak to the hospital i went.
And i told the snake charmer you never like me for who I am .
You wanted me to be something I was not.
It almost cost me my life.
Goodbye snake charmer I pray for the next woman you try to poison. For I survived from your poison.

© 2008 Belinda Arcelay


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Added on April 22, 2008
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Belinda Arcelay
Belinda Arcelay

Brooklyn, NY



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Married with children.......loves anime, wrestling and simpsons! I like to write poems. more..

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