When darkness falls upon the earth,
The stars and moon fill the skies with beauty and grace.
While some people are sleeping,
I'm awake enjoying the silence.
A sensuous night breeze
goes through my window
Sends a wonderful chill
up and down my spine.
To me the night is sinful and sweet
Because who knows what can happen within
The blackness of the night.
I walk alone in the darkness of night
Because my world is full of
I myself write dark poems myself, so of course I was drawn to
this poem. I have to say when you write dark poems, you really
have to explore a side that is hidden within yourself, that speaks
to the very core of you. Darkness can be sensual, raw, harsh, intense.
It has many sides to explore. I believe your attempt was good, yet
I felt you may have been holding back. I don't mean to sound arrogant,
but being a dark writer, I have explored, and I can express. I wish you
luck in the future with your writing.
I myself write dark poems myself, so of course I was drawn to
this poem. I have to say when you write dark poems, you really
have to explore a side that is hidden within yourself, that speaks
to the very core of you. Darkness can be sensual, raw, harsh, intense.
It has many sides to explore. I believe your attempt was good, yet
I felt you may have been holding back. I don't mean to sound arrogant,
but being a dark writer, I have explored, and I can express. I wish you
luck in the future with your writing.