5 Years Later

5 Years Later

A Poem by Belinda Arcelay
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After 5 years together , Does her husdand still love her?

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Do you still love me ?

Unemployed at home with kids,

Belly a little bigger

Do you still love me?

Up and downs with family drama.

Belly a little bigger

Do you still love me?

Kids getting older and stress getting higher

Do you still love me?

Bodies getting older, tried bones and bigger bellies.

Do you still love me?

After 5 years of craziness,happiness and love.

DO you still love ME?

© 2008 Belinda Arcelay


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how sweet Matthew
hard to find people who arent shallow and superficial
i wish you two the best
both in love and in your poetry

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

as the sun rises and sets .....
as the stars shine never regrets ....
as the wind blows against the sea .... changing tides
i am swept away in you as you are in me ....
the answer is yes now and always i will still love you

you are my sunshine

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Belly getting bigger... rub it for good luck. I liked this structure, it worked well for this brief piece. You shared so much with a little, enough to let us know you are a lover not a hater.

Posted 16 Years Ago


If he doesn't then he is a dumb-a*s!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I suspect whoever you are asking has a little bigger belly too , is related to the kids , has tired bones, etc and I suspect the answer to your question is Yes. Welcome to writers cafe!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a cute poem, I liked the idea of wondering if you'll still be loved for who you are, even after such a long amount of time. Very sweet. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 20, 2008
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Belinda Arcelay
Belinda Arcelay

Brooklyn, NY



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Married with children.......loves anime, wrestling and simpsons! I like to write poems. more..

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