My Love

If I could go back in time
Way before we met
I would find you right away
And form our loving nest
Hand in hand I would go with you
Each and every moment I would spend with you
We would tie our knot with thread of love
Make it much more stronger each day that pass
I would fear no fate
For you were my fate, my sweet darling
I want nothing more, no money, no luxury
Cuz you are my world honey
My love for you is like a raging sea
Powerful, strong and very deep
No storm, wind and rain can depart our love for each other
Cuz we can withstand every pain and trouble that may come in our path
My heart is pure and love is sweet
I love you more than my own heartbeat
Now on our anniversary
I wish upon stars
Twinkling in the night, lighting the world
May our love grow each day more and more
May showers of blessing fill our life and I can always be the reason of your smile

Reviews

[Laz K.]

I was expecting some twist, or surprise ending, but there's just pure goodness and love here. I'm so envious! :) The poetic persona of this piece is a blessed, lucky person.

[Lea Sheryn]

Beautifully stated and so romantic!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Another great poem. I can see this was written with so much love, and you wrote it so well it pulls you deep into the poem.

' would fear no fate
For you were my fate, my sweet darling'

That's definitely my favorite line from it, and if wrote that poem in a book, I would have that page bookmarked and everything, haha! It's such a great poem, and I really hope you keep writing and posting because each poem is better than the last!