Lost

Based on a true story.. My friend Elena went missing on May 25, 2011 and hasn't been found since.

Hello?

 Is anyone out there?

  I'm lost and cannot find my way home..

 

I've been missing for a few days now..

 I am locked inside of something.

  Someone please find me.

 

 You've probably seen my picture.

   I have blond hair, and blue eyes.

    My name is Elena Rodreques.

      I think i am in Heaven but I am not sure.

  But will you find me?

 

  I walk around in my dreams but are they dreams? Or reality?

   I am missing.

    I was taken from my bed on May 25, 2011.

     My mom and dad wonder where I am.

And so do I.

Reviews

[Victoria Elizabeth]

Sami, are you freakin serious? Do you even no this girl? If your lying and the police see this there gonna come to you for question, then they are going to take you to her family and your not gonna know what to say.

[Sami Geiger]

you need to leave me alone. you dont know anything.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

you know what, fine what the f**k ever, don't talk to me do you think i really care, why don't you ask Darnell what I told him, I'm so sick of you ruining every thing that i like doing, you took Darnell away from me, you took my safe haven away that was drama free and now here you are lying to everyone on this website, YOUR SUCH A TWOFACE LITTLE B***H

[Sami Geiger]

Okay one you dont know me and two that was darnells choice

[Victoria Elizabeth]

sorry, sami about this i didnt mean it

[Sami Geiger]

its okay you get pretty used to it by now.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

ohhhh

[Sami Geiger]

Thanks all who have read it. Elena has been missing for a while and she had one of these and i thought it would be nice to keep it going for her

[That_Girl]

I'm sorry to hear about your friend. That's a shame. But, since this is a writing site, I will critique.

The repetition weighs the poem down, in my opinion. There are a few grammatical errors that create hiccups as well.

Again, sorry about your friend, I hope she's found soon.

[David Scott]

I am so sorry your friend is missing! No need to review the poetry. You have expressed a concern in your heart. We hear you and listen and I for one already said a prayer for you and Elena.