How, Who, What, Why, Where, When

Explains how i feel about life

How long till I reach the bottom?

The bottom of this never ending pit

Farther and farther, darker and darker

No floor that I can hit

Who can save me from this nightmare?

The nightmare they call my life

No rainbows, just black storms

That shoot golden knifes

What will become of my world?

The chaotic mess and all

Beaten and beaten, till I can take no more

No mercy till I can only crawl

Why is it that nobody can see?

The monster that has taken me

Evil to the core she is

No way will she let me be

Where did this all start?

The troubles that have no end

So much pain this life is

No where can I see a place to mend

When will this stop?

The troubles that have no end

I need some joy

Maybe even hope that you could lend

How long till i reach the bottom?

Who can save me from this nightmare?

What will become of my world?

Why is it that nobody can see?

Where did this all start?

When will this stop?

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Re-Pete]

Very dark yet draws me into this painful world. Well done. I enjoyed reading it.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your How, Who, What, Why, Where, When poem is very interesting, everyone of us goes through this phase of life, in search of answer for those questions. Keep fingers crossed time changes everything! :)

[Cecile Wonder]

Thanks! I appreciate it.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You're Welcome!

[Robert Parlange]

I think when you hit bottom, you can always go back up. That's from experience.

[Cecile Wonder]

Unless you keep getting pulled back down... otherwise I agree

[Robert Parlange]

Be stronger than the ones doing the pulling. You'd be surprised how weak they really are.

[Cecile Wonder]

Thats good advice.