How, Who, What, Why, Where, When

How, Who, What, Why, Where, When

A Poem by Cecile Wonder
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Explains how i feel about life

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How long till I reach the bottom?

The bottom of this never ending pit

Farther and farther, darker and darker

No floor that I can hit


Who can save me from this nightmare?

The nightmare they call my life

No rainbows, just black storms

That shoot golden knifes


What will become of my world?

The chaotic mess and all

Beaten and beaten, till I can take no more

No mercy till I can only crawl


Why is it that nobody can see?

The monster that has taken me

Evil to the core she is

No way will she let me be


Where did this all start?

The troubles that have no end

So much pain this life is

No where can I see a place to mend


When will this stop?

The troubles that have no end

I need some joy

Maybe even hope that you could lend


How long till i reach the bottom?

Who can save me from this nightmare?

What will become of my world?

Why is it that nobody can see?

Where did this all start?

When will this stop?

© 2015 Cecile Wonder


Author's Note

Cecile Wonder
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Very dark yet draws me into this painful world. Well done. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your How, Who, What, Why, Where, When poem is very interesting, everyone of us goes through this phase of life, in search of answer for those questions. Keep fingers crossed time changes everything! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cecile Wonder

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I appreciate it.
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

You're Welcome!
I think when you hit bottom, you can always go back up. That's from experience.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cecile Wonder

8 Years Ago

Unless you keep getting pulled back down... otherwise I agree
Robert Parlange

8 Years Ago

Be stronger than the ones doing the pulling. You'd be surprised how weak they really are.
Cecile Wonder

8 Years Ago

Thats good advice.

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Cecile Wonder
Cecile Wonder

Bellevue, MI



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I love reading writing and music. My life practically revolves around these three things. I love to meet new people and to read others writing. I'm all for criticism, for it makes me a better writer. .. more..

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