Disgust.

A poem about my friend's relationship.

She doesn't deserve this

She sits alone, longing to get away

To her own little world

To her own place of peace

Treat her like a possession

That's no brand of love

Don't be surprised when she leaves

It will be the best choice she makes

I'm sick of watching, holding my tongue

You'd rather take care of you

And have her do the same

You are sickening.

She'll walk away one day

With the support of her loved ones

Because they know with you

You don't even know the meaning of love.

Author's Note

This is not about me, this is about a friend in a shitty position right now...

Reviews

[The Joker]

Often relationships are hell and you describe the s**t they can truley be well done

[President LincPwln]

Great write. Better picture.

[Sophster300]

Very well done, great write :)

[Sleepless]

dang 1 well from what i read i hope she doesnt have to tlearn the bad way ! but nice poem :)

[J Todd Underhill]

Look and Learn, it is good to see what kind of situations your friends get into so you can avoid them yourself. This was a good vent poem.

[Princepessa]

its gr8!!!!!!! so true and observent and sad. good job