Pain

She hurt herself because he hurt her.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Beautiful line you've cracked on your story-page. Much depth's hidden in behind your deepen words. I believe, if you stretch a write little more like around... to 250-words, it'll be more heartfelt and mysterious to read. However, one line-story-write's still full of emotions & insights. Well written.

After reading your words, I got the climax of your beautiful story-write which says, "Climax: "She lived a life in night, because he made her feeling alive.""

[Christy Aldridge]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and I will certainly take your advice into consideration.

[Adam Adams]

You're welcome! Thanks for letting me know that you kindly take my advice into consideration. I enjoy your work... would be heading on to your latest write... would be even expecting to read some of your poetic-art (poetry) if you do write by the side.