When Will You Grow Up

About an ex who just didn't treat me right.

He messes around all the time

Always telling dirty and naughty jokes

Hardly ever gets serious

Unless it’s important to him

Childish

He hardly shows any real or true feelings

Hardly ever says, “I love you” first

Doesn’t spend enough time with his so called “love”

Won’t call you; You’d have to call him

Insensitive

Goes from girl to girl

Saying he loves them

When in reality he just wants to f**k

He goes back to the same girls

Dates his friend girls

Insecure

Childish, Insensitive, Insecure teenager

When will you ever learn?

When will you listen?

When will you just grow up?

Reviews

[My Fair Lady]

Wow, I like this. It is an accurate description of a "tool" and I think you have done well. Bravo.

[Jadee]

I can relate to many parts of this poem... It's very good! I love the underlined bits, they add... intensity? Is that a good word?