Come back to me!!

A person is telling his heart to come back because.......

Come back to me..

 

Don’t go away leaving me all alone

In search of illusion

It’s a process of hunting your own shadow!

Life is neither a dream nor beautiful

What you are having imagine of 

Oh my heart.. Come back to me..

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A dark cloud surrounded throughout the lives

Nothing is visible clearly

Origin of life filled with desire’s maelstrom

Nowhere you are able to move

World will use you as per their need

No one accept or respect you

They just suppress you till the end of breath

 

Oh my heart.. Come back to me..

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It’s a home of greed, they sell dreams

 It’s a life of desires, they eradicate feelings

How you find a place for love in the town of obsession?

 They eat you alive in the name of society!

Oh my heart.. Still what for you waiting?

Come back to me..

Oh my heart.. Come back to me.

Bring some dreams to annoyed eyes which are waiting for you

Reviews

[De-personalize Yourself]

Lovely piece, very emotive. Just a few grammatical errors I want to point out-
-"Life is neither a dream nor a beautiful": 'beautiful' is an adjective, so ending a sentence at 'a beautiful' is not gramatically correct. Perhaps you could say "life is neither a dream nor beautiful".
-"What you are having imagine off": I can't figure out what you are trying to say here. Could you clarify for me?
-"Nowhere you able to move": Perhaps you could change this to "Nowhere you are able to move"
-"They eat you lively in the name of society!": 'they eat you alive in the name of society'?

[Praveen Patil]

Thank you very much "Megan" I changed my grammatical mistakes as per your suggestions.. I expect your suggestions in my every writing.. Thanks