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A Poem by writer in trial
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This is for someone who is very dearer to me. Though we don't have contacts any more, but I hope he still remembers me through the wonderful memories we shared.

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The rolling tides of sea

The flying grains of sand

In the end,

They are back to the start,

Where they’re born,

Where they have to merge.

I am a blowing wind,

Blowing everywhere.

I meet some friends

And mix with them.

Some smells good

And some smells odd.

We combine

That change who I am.

I don’t want that

So I blow back.

The melodies you create

Just spark me hard.

I blow by miles

Just to get you back

I surprised to find,

There’s a void!!

Where did you fly ?

Leaving traces for me.

I fill that void

Surviving with memories.

 

 

 

 

© 2014 writer in trial


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"Leaving traces for me.

I fill that void

Surviving with memories."

A wonderful write especially the ending...Bravo...................


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writer in trial

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sami. :)
Your reviews are always constructive.
I am not that active in Writersca.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Good . You are welcome...:).............

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Added on April 14, 2014
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Tags: Memories, You, traces, melody

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writer in trial

Bangalore, KARNATAKA, India



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