Vagabond

Wandering in an empty street

He has got nothing to do

Kicking those empty cans

Murmuring songs looking up the stars

Someone should hold his hand

And show him the right way to go

These good things aren't gonna work anymore

Sniffing whites will cure it all

Laughing at himself

He knows he has no respect

Where’s the beginning

Where’s the end

He’s struggling

To find the purpose of his existence

Walking over miles and miles

Looking at people

Sailing on the same boat

How emotions will grow

If the base is so concrete

“Sad world, sad people”

He said.

“I am a vagabond whose journey has no end”.

Reviews

[Samuel Jack]

A very harsh life, but one many live everyday. This is almost the story of the normal modern life, many poeple in work are living like this as well.

This poem painted the whole picture for what life is like for these poor lost souls.

Good words Dost! Well done kumaari!

Aapka

Samuel

[writer in trial]

Dhanyawaad Dost :)
Right now i am in this state. Very very unstable :(
I love how you write "kumaari".
ha ha :D
Thanks dost :)
aapki Hindi sahi main acchi hai :D

[Samuel Jack]

Yes my Hindi is terrible :) im just mashing the little bits Ive seen together. Ill translate your little sentance later. did I use Kumaari incorrectly?

[writer in trial]

no. It's perfect. It means girl. But it isn't that popular. So people generally use "ladki" for girl. :)
Your Hindi is fine. :)
what i wrote in Hindi right now means Your hindi is good. :)

[Samuel Jack]

is kumaari a more formal form? I'd love to know the context it is usualy used in.

[writer in trial]

its actually used in old times. esp used for a king's daughter. they used to call her rajkumaari. raja means king. But when both raja and kumaari is combined to make one word,it becomes rajkumari. similarly, rajkumar means king's son. :). Nowadays in some parts of India esp In Bihar And Uttar Pradesh, people have surnames like kumar or kumari. Its funny actually coz we know that he is a boy and she is a girl. but it's a trend in that side to hide actual surnames. So they make it kumar or kumari for boy and girls resp. :D. But if you want to address a girl then say ladki and for boy its ladka. :)

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that s my favourite movie. very briliant perfomance by SANDRINE BONAIRE. i realy like how you describe feelings people on the road. we are all on journey without end. thanks

[writer in trial]

Thanks dear :)
And you are right. ;)

[Leandro Mendez]

wow great work here!! I am like that vagabond....... hahaha funny

[writer in trial]

So you too. :D
Two lost souls in search of lites of hope. :D
Thanks Friend. ;)

[Onku Ghosh]

A well witten piece with an apt title."I am a vagabond whose journey has no end."-a beautiful line telling us hat it is like being a vagabond.Your thoughts have been well expressed here.Good write!!!

[writer in trial]

Thanks Dear :)

[Avinash]

Loved it ..reminds me of my state of mind few yrs back.

[writer in trial]

Ha ha. Well i think we all might have gone through this way or feeling now only :D
Thanks :)