Love Birds

This was my first poem that i wrote instantly. It was raining outside and i was feeling romantic. My lover wasn't with me so I converted my feelings to writings. :D

Cloudy cloudy sky
Cold and soothing air
Feels as if the rain to come
Going to spread the miracle of love
Couples are sitting side by side
Mingling eyes with one another eye
Something is still burning in rain
So immense and free of pain
Your skin is burning and mine too
But nothing is striking in mind what to do?
Your silence says something
Come closer and forget everything
Touching of lips and holding of hands
Eyes are closed with mind out of control

Feels as if we are enclosed

In the circle of love with "such" distinction ...
A warm feeling "yet" so sweet 
Let it continue
until our formalities get vanished 
and souls get banished 

love is in the air

let ourselves free and live forever

IN THE CIRCLE OF LOVE.......

Reviews

[OBWhiteHawk]

This feels like a spiritual gathering, or a peace prayer sort of thing. This is beautiful, I love it.

[writer in trial]

Thanks Dear :)

[Leandro Mendez]

this is cute, very romantic :)

[writer in trial]

Thanks Dear :)

[Kyle J. Lawson]

This was pretty inspiring. People should read this if they're having a bad day. :)

[writer in trial]

Thanks a lot :)

[Kyle J. Lawson]

Not a problem. :D