Realizing the Truth(INCOMPLETE!)

Temporary..might change it later...hope everyone likes it!!!

 Realizing the Truth

 I walked back from the meeting in a complete trance.

And no, the sphere isn't some kind of hypnotic device, it was in fact what the sphere had told me that had left me in this state. You will just have to wait for me to relate what happened in the meeting...I'm WAY too knocked out.

"Onella, where are you going??" Cacilia called from behind me. "Huh? AAAAHH!!" I screamed as I fell head first from the corner of the platform where the queen had called me to stand.

So, I was tumbling towards my untimely doom, (or so I thought), when I suddenly started floating.

I tried to to turn my head around and caught my aunt glaring at me. My aunt's hands were growing purple, her power colour, as she stuggled to keep me floating.

"What were you thinking?!?" she hollered. Then noticing the pained, confused look on my face, she gently lifted me up. "Let's go home." She said softly.

On our way back home, there was complete silence. Finally, to break the uncomfortable aura, I whimpered- "Why me?"

" It is the way of the Sphere, and your destiny, child." My aunt said, tears welling in her eyes.

 

Back at home, I was gazing out of the window from my bedroom, looking out at the stars. I saw an arragment in their pattern, which immediatley reminded me of my father. My eyes glazed with tears as I struggled to hold them back. I'm not the type of person to let out my feelings, but now I gave in and let my tears fall freely. I couldn't be homesick, for my aunt Cacilia's place IS my home, but my heart longed to actually see my forgotten father. There was a knock on my bedroom door, and my aunt came in.

"Here darling, I made your favourite drink, chocolate malt with wipped cream on top" My aunt smiled.

I grinned back. How could you NOT feel at home here? There are some things magic can't make, I thought as I gingerly took the chocolate malt from here.

She sat on the edge of my bed and looked at me, with a sad look on her face, and at once I knew she was thinking about the vision the sphere had made.

"Onella, I--"

"NO, auntie. I know what I have to do. And I'll proudly do it for The Queen, King, You, Quistella....and for my mother."

"You don't have to do this" My aunt pleaded with me. "You would be much safer--"

"No I wouldn't!! Lie after lie, I would be MUCH safer in Zandall's hands" I said harshly. Immediatley, I regretted saying that and bit my lip. My aunt just wanted me to be safe, after all...

"I'm sorry, Onella...I couldn't tell you before...If I did, I'd be putting you in such danger...I couldn't take it if anything happened to you!" My aunt sobbed.

It was true, I felt bad, putting her in this misery. But it was her fault.

"Then auntie, you should have told me my mother was alive all this time."

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Yes, its true..my mother, Fiora Marsinel, is alive. Where? That, I don't know. But one thing is for sure, I have to find them. The only two who can lead me to her....and the king.

Cacilia, obviously, was adamant, and wouldn't let me step out of the house. Now that she was gone...

I got up from my bed and started packing up my things. My sword, my mother's ring, a few provisions and clothes in a small runsack, and my most prized possesion, my belt. My belt was enchanted so I could...actually, I have no idea what my belt does..the only thing my aunt mentioned when she gave it to me was that I would have to figure out what it does myself. And to tell you the truth..I'm no good at puzzles.

That should be enough, I thought, and headed for the window. I opened it and made sure there wasn't anyone on the street outside. Seeing nobody, I muttered a small spell, conjuring a yellow light to my hand-

Source of light that guides me through,

I seek thy help as I approach you,

take me to the ones I need,

To find my mother, who shall I lead?

I closed my eyes as warmth from the light flew through me. Visions flooded through my mind, and I gasped.

NO, I thought. It couldn't be that place. It couldn't be possible..

But I had to do this...for my mother..and HIM. I just didn't think I'd be a mile near him to do this.

I lifted my hand, muttered the teleporting spell, and I was gone, and with me, the light.

 

 

Author's Note

It's incomplete, but please spare some time to review it!! Thank you! I'll be continuing it very soon!

Reviews

[Moonlight]

Ushoo...I like.

[Moonlight]

You jump from place to place too fast. There isn't enough description of each scene, which leaves the reader with a confused state, since he has to fill in all the gaps himself. There's nothing wrong with making it long - that principle made me write short, undescriptive work for a long time but i finally got over it.
Other than that, the story is developing nicely!
I hope you don't mind harsh criticism,
-Moonlight :)

[Ale]

It is very good! But at some parts of the story, I felt confused...as if I couldn't quite follow what you were talking about. Also, you may need to dwell upon some subjects for a longer time, and not jump quickly from topic to topic. Otherwise, it is a great story, and I enjoy reading it!