A answer that is in need of A Women

A answer that is in need of A Women

A Poem by Praiser

Where share I start
I say love, time then money, but some of your ladies
 Money has fashion you to be selfish and bossy to show what more  important in your life
what would you like to have first ?  I say Love 
God,  you,  your family  , friends,  helping others, being there  for someone else you don`t know ,would you agree for love?
How about time , support , A partnership that share and do things with each other that tell  time on your arm I can hold you better then  material things 
What is time ? when u wasted ,  When  it should been A conversation with you and God to make this relationship better.....
But balance your Issue and feeling and your stubbing ways is breaking up our relationship,  to look at my own faults , to see where i didn't listen to you
when your right and I was wrong
Wouldn't you Agree?
I ask again Ladies, what really do you wont in  a man?
 Is it Just to fulfill your passion 
Where he is  secure to protect the elements of your Intimacy
With so much support his endurance give over time off
So personal
When my  desire can take picture of your feeling  praying  ,as we lay obeying the law of the bed......
We are marriage to do these beautiful things
Where did we go wrong to fight  argument to make us say  thing s we don`t mean?
What is love without time ?  that looks for money , when we should be looking for God
A banefuller lust that drained u to stay alone
How much time have I wasted , not spending enough time with our kids,  to see some of the beauty  of you  that keeping us laughing even if we are not together....
I'm taking care of my responsible to be a father with out us fuss 
But will still cant get along ..... MONEY 
Some us have the right man an the right husband but we still look for Mr right
Some us have the right women and the right wife but we still cheat with some one else
How is this is so backwards when money comes only one way( The root of all Evil) 
When having A women there is a price......
How much do cost to spend time  with love ,.....
When its you 




© 2011 Praiser


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I normally never say this, but "wow" let me take a step back, a breath then comment. I know all women are not like this and yet you seem to have one that is. It is an awful feeling to know someone is into money more than you or family. I know this all too intimately and your poem opens a new wound but it is all good for it hasn't closed yet. You ask many questions here to women or maybe to one woman but I imagine you already know the answer to each question. Strong poem, stronger words and intent. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Praiser
Praiser

Lynchburge, VA



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I write for God an I dance for him My group mime is call prodigious My hip hop Gospel group is movers and shakers , my Minstery name is Praiser the Show-off Worshiper more..

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