What A Convesation

Romantic to teach feeling

          An interview

A conversation couldn't speak
        when we became one

 There was a covenant

     A moment couldn't think of
            this war

Was only desire using pleasure to win victories
    when you are the sheets to cover me?

         My clothes are uncomfortable
   When I put you on they came off

         Because walking on passion

  Is a kiss to wash your back
that gave our touch a want

      For more to fill
when a crush isn't companion enough

      To be comparative
the song we make love to

 Is a commitment, with fullness
when everything is not right?

 We are still together 

         Not by feeling but by faith
how long do you need to be with me?

         When eternal said forever
how much time do I need to tell you?

           I love you
when without touching you was so long

 What I was reaching to hold was your voice

By Fredrick Pennix Aka Praiser the Show-Off Worshiper

 

 

Reviews

[Goodbye]

Wow - this is so spiritually romantic - that's the only term I can think of. There's some grammatical problems here and there, but they pale in the feeling of this very lovely poem.