A women burden to cry when a man run`s from his responsibility

A women burden to cry when a man run`s from his responsibility

A Poem by Praiser

She is
Stronger then a journey that`s hold the path of his foot print t that walk away
She is
Stronger then the issue that`s telling her she can`t make it without him
She is
Stronger then her burden crying a hot meal for soul food
She see what the child don`t see the responsibility of the father
Cold without winter when the heart is still ice
The gift that he has now, her son is saying
 Mom is there a real l Santa for Christmas
Where lies and pain doesn't `t mix , how can she describe her tears to drink tea
When one child is being favorite  and the other child become a stranger
When her pain is on its  knees  which prayer does the situation believe
What the children can`t see or is it the reason why the father decision is to run
Doing more then 9 months she carried him
For the time he was on top to help make it
Why do a man run from his responsibility ?
Just to have another child to blame the other mother for his lack of money




© 2010 Praiser


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I have seen many men just walk away and some even refused to get an on top of the table job because they didn't want the state to automatically take out child support. You ask what makes a man do this, it is usually a man who has grown up without the influence of a full time father to teach them how to be a father in the first place. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This speaks to me personally, on a mother level and a daughter level. I think that women who have sons have a responsibility to teach them how to be the man they would want as a father and someone to be counted on for a wife. Things become complex when men are intimate with woman, make a baby and had no intention in the first place of being a genuine addition to their life. For many it's all about the physical. Being a good father isn't condoned nor taught much at all anymore.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have seen many men just walk away and some even refused to get an on top of the table job because they didn't want the state to automatically take out child support. You ask what makes a man do this, it is usually a man who has grown up without the influence of a full time father to teach them how to be a father in the first place. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is so sad. I love, (love!!)how you write about what a man should be. I dont think men are encouraged at all to be there for their families, or even to express themselves for who they are. It seems like men are shut up, told to buck up, and they can't handle it because the world is not theirs to bear. Men are called to a place of strength, but strength in this society is not very hard to gain unlike the true strength it takes to be there for someone else and actually love them. Awesome writings. Thanks brother for your arts for Him.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Praiser
Praiser

Lynchburge, VA



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I write for God an I dance for him My group mime is call prodigious My hip hop Gospel group is movers and shakers , my Minstery name is Praiser the Show-off Worshiper more..

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