The Rib part 2

The Rib part 2

A Poem by Praiser
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Me and Mobettablue team up to write to my poem the Rib I need

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From The Rib Part 2
Mobettablue(Talking)
Do you want to talk about it?

I say it... Even though I know you don't want to

You are feeling like you are not enough but You

Are enough for me...

I can see straight through that steel in your eyes

I can see past those hard words and I am trying

To make you see...

That those vows I spoke came from my heart and not my lips

That this world may break you down but I am not them

I am the gift

The rib

That's why even though I am tired just like you

You always come home to a hot plate of food

and your house and children are clean

But sometimes you make me feel like it don't mean a thing:
Praiser (Talking)
Yes my everything when there more then enough to be for you
I stay quite to hear your thoughts cry a conversation
I know your dreams were set on hold because of me
for this sacrifice I love you with the nail in my hand and I can see the nail in your sou when there not enough of you
I work to hold what I cant control , my love for you
When you are pleasing me and not pleasing your self
how selfish can I be when you are doing more then enough
Let me cook for you sometime who care if I`m tired it
Let me get the kids ready for school
Let me run your bath water with roses and candles singing to you are my queen
If I have to take the 2 day off just to be what you are hiding
from me you won`t have to tell me again I will know
Mobettablue(Talking)
Communication, comprise, this cord is three fold

I will talk to HIM so he can give me the words to let you know

How I feel because and no man could put asunder, not even we ourselves

Connected and protected because through it all we have always held

Onto His hand.

I hope decades from now we can still dance

and if you look at me say it's okay but I know better anyway

we can work it out because...

this love

is here to stay.

© 2010 Praiser


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This is so sweet, so loving, so reassuring to your love...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Praiser
Praiser

Lynchburge, VA



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I write for God an I dance for him My group mime is call prodigious My hip hop Gospel group is movers and shakers , my Minstery name is Praiser the Show-off Worshiper more..

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