mere anmol ratan

Meri saari khushiya Teri ho jaye....
Tere saare gham mere ho jaye....
Prarthna h is rakhi par meri...
Jo tu chahe wo tera ho jaye...
Mere bhai iss rakhi par kuch ESA ho jaye....
Meri umar b tujhe lg jaye....
Tu kare kaam kuch ESE ki tera jag m naam ho jaye....
Har safalta ki seedi chume kadam tmhare....
Tamanna h meri ki rab s kuch ESA ho jaye....
Muskurahat na chhute kbhi tmhare labo s ...
Ashko ki na ho teri aankho m koi jagah...
Is rakhi bs yhi khwaish h meri...
Tere har sukh m...tere har dukh m....apni is behn ko sath tu hmesha payega....
Zindagi k kisi b mod p....jab b tu yaad karega...
Teri is behn ko hmesha sath
payega....
Vada h mera tujhse....jb jb tujhe mera sath chahiye hoga...
Tb tb tu mujhe hmesha sath payega...
Tu khud ko kbhi koi nuksan na pohochayega....
AGR de skta h kuch to bs ek vachan de de....
Khush kismat hu m ki mujhe tera sath mila....
Or kya chahiye zindagi m....
Bs yhi kaafi h tu Bhai k roop m mila....

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

I have read it twice... I got emotional...I have three cute sisters but none of them express the way you share your feelings for your brother... It's me every time, who try harder to make them happy... It's a sad part that sometimes strictness is also important for being an elder child, specially if you don't have mother to handle your siblings...

[pragya gaur]

Thanks for the review Abhishek ji

[Great Aunt Astri]

Reading through the comments, this poem sounds fascinating. I would love to have a translation to give to my brother. Good for you, using your own native language (but please don't do it too often .. us mere one-languagers haven't a clue!)

[pragya gaur]

Thanks for the review mam ... Sure I will follow what you said

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautifully written........

[pragya gaur]

THanku.....

[Zoya]

Oh wow...you're such a sweet sister. Wish all the sisters were that way with their siblings :p. Very well done.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot Zoe

[Zoya]

No problem

[Carol Cashes]

You sent me a Read Request - and I understand not one word of this! *laughing* Based on Najam's review, is this the Indian language version of your poem I read earlier about your brother?

[Zoya]

Well...sorry to jump in...but no, that one's a bit different...though with the same theme

[pragya gaur]

Ya mam this is the version of our mother tongue..... Thanks for the review....And Zoe...Thanks to u

[Priyanshi]

Aww, so well written, I must dedicate this to my brother...Happy Rakshabandhan to you.

[pragya gaur]

THanku for your kind words and visit

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Najam Us Saher]

Your brother is very lucky to have you as a sister.
A lovely poem and a prayer. :)

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot Najam

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.