Brother's love is priceless

Not so good I know...But yet tried enough to express my feelings

Best companion to a sister,
Yes I am talking about a brother.
The month of August is what,
Most people eagerly wait for.
How beautiful the day is,
When a saves his pocket money for his dear sis.
How wonderful it is to see all sisters,
Choosing the best Rakhi for their brothers.
A bro is the best gift of God,
Having one is really a proud.
The one who can make his sis girl cry,
But can't see a single tear because of someone other.
Fighting, arguing and then loving,
That's why this relation is pleasing.
Elder or younger,
A brother should be there.
Luckiest to have a few of them by my side
Who are always there for me any time
Elders to act like dad,
Younger to get scolded by dad.
Elder to teach us,
Younger to tease us.
And the best one is of same age,
Who helps uh in every stage.
No words to explain,
How much I love them.
Can fight with the world,
Just for them.

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

While this has some cultural tones I don't really get (Choosing the best Rakhi for their brothers.), the overall message is not missed. Siblings can be the best of friends, and while this has not been my personal experience, having only been close of one of my 3 siblings, and only in adulthood, I can feel what I witness in other families. Good on you for acknowledging this special bond.

[pragya gaur]

THanku so much for read and review

[Joey Nizz]

after reading your piece made me wish that I had a brother lol..

You have expressed this perfectly, emotions were flowing in your sentences.

Well done, this has been a pleasant read. Thank you for sharing.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot for your read and review

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome :)

[Priyanshi]

hey, brothers are really the special gift by god... feeling when expressed in poem is always good..no comparison with the love of bro. an sis.
great work.

[pragya gaur]

Thanku so much ☺

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

gee, this is so nice to read, and to see someone appreciating her brother...my sister would never share this sentiment.

j.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks for the review J ☺ this means a lot

[Najam Us Saher]

This is very admiring poem. I liked it, I can feel how you might feel even though I don't have a brother.

[pragya gaur]

I also don't have a brother it is for my classmates cum brother

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is a really playful and a pretty poem....and on the occasion of raksha bandhan this poem has made its way...
keep.it up dear...keep writing.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot for read and review