My dad

This poem is description of love of a father....and a way of saying thanks to my dad....n saying how much I love him

The one who forgets his dreams
Just to fulfil our demands,
The one who sacrifices
Just for us,
He is no other than our dad.

The one who is his girl's king
And a boy's superhero,
He is no one other than our dad.

The one who doesn't express his love like mom,
But expresses his love through mom.

The one who is happier than us on our success,
The one who gives us pocket money and hides from mom,
He is no one other than our dad.

Harsh from outside,soft from inside
Just like a coconut,
He is no one other than our dad.

The one who teaches us to walk,
The one who shows us the world on his shoulder,
He is no one other than our dad.

Neither I have words to say thanks,
Nor I have words to express love.
Promise to make you proud one day,
It's all I can say.
THANK YOU PAPA

Author's Note

Ignore grmaar problems

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

a fine heart warming tribute to your dad ..and all dad's that shoulder their responsibilities in the home ..i hope you sent him a copy ;) i am sure it would inspire all the fulfilling experiences he had in raising you ... happy and sad; good and bad ... as it does for me ... as well as deep appreciation for all my grown children ... so glad i stopped to read ... peace and joy!
E.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot ji

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .................

[Anshuman Aryav]

Awesome creation dear...
Well done..

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot for your kind read and visit

[Coyote Poetry]

The hope of a father.
"Promise to make you proud one day,
It's all I can say.
THANK YOU PAPA"
The above lines. The wish of us fathers. Our children to be able to stand strong and wise. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot for read and review. thanks for your kind visit

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Richard🖌]

Beautifully expressed, pragya.
I surely hope your dad got to read it.
"Like a coconut" made me smile, and the rest warmed my heart, as I'm sure it did Papa's.

Thank you for the lovely moments shared! ⁓ Richard : )

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Richard Ji... But papa doesn't even know I write and not even about this work...when I will do something appreciable then I will show it to him...so that he will b proud of me

[Richard🖌]

Oh!
Well, if I were your papa, pragya, I'd be proud of you as a writer, and of this lovely poem in homage to me. : )
BTW, my name is simply Richard, not Richard "Ji", but what is the meaning of"Ji", does it have a particular signifcance in your language, pragya?

[pragya gaur]

Actually i always put Ji...after everyone's name just to give respect

[Richard🖌]

I see … I humbly bow, Pragya Ji*

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You make me cry with the innocence and pure love in your poems, Pragya! You so well descibe your dad in both his good and not so good points, he "expresses himself through mom" and is "harsh from outside, soft from inside"-yet he is a hero to his family and is "his girl's king"....Beautiful!

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Annette ji

[Surya]

Every word is true, emotions purely felt....After reading this only a thing in my eyes, tears and in mind...I miss my dad...
I honestly loved the whole piece...:)

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Surya ji

[Surya]

Indeed thanks to you for posting...:)

[Karen John]

Keep on writing...
Its so sweet....
And try to minimize the grammar mistakes...
U r doing very well!!

[pragya gaur]

Oh.thanks Karen ji...N surely I. Will reduce grammar mistakes...Thanks for the review

[Priyanshi]

This poem is the best way to thank dad.....
Keep on writing, dear...
Great work, Pragya.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks dearie

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, Pragya.