since the day i met you

This poem describes about the bonding of me and my best friend. His friendship for me is a gift of got and I love him a lot

I have got my best friend,
Since the day I met you.
I have got a trustworthy friend,
Since the day I met you.
I never found myself alone since the day I met you.
All boys are not the same,some are the gift of god,
You came in my life and proved it true.
You solve all my problems and support me a lot .
My bestie I love you a lot.
I got a faithful friend,
Since the day I met you.
I promise to never break your trust,
You remember our friendship also started by trust.
I promise to be beside you whenever you need me,
I promise to help you whenever you need me.
I have got a best friend,
Since the day I met you.

Reviews

[karina]

i think ik ur inpiration xP .. well its good pragyaa :*

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Karina ji

[Surya]

You are lucky then, that's all I wanna say..
I loved it...:)

[unskilled ink]

wonderful work...Happy friendship to u and ur bestie..

[pragya gaur]

Thanks for the review this means a lot to me...I invite you please look my others too..m sure you will like it

[brinda]

Great job!!The simplicity in the poem shines through.Some relationships such as friendship are best explained simply and you have been wonderful at that

[pragya gaur]

Thanku brinda Ji...thanks a lot...please review my other works too ...I hope you will like it

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Wonderful poem Pragya! Your bestie is so lucky to have you for a friend...." I promise to be beside you whenever you need me"- beautiful line. Great use of words and repetition for emphasis of feelings. Honest emotions well-expressed. Great writing!

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot Higley jii....

[Priyanshi]

Best friends are the gift of God, an i pray to god that each person has the bestie like your's one....your poem is great...portrayed well your emotions...keep on trying , dear...you are on the way to success.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot dear..... I promise to give my best....all I need support n suggestions one like yours...

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, Pragya.