We tie untill we die

The poem is about my dear friends who support me at every step....they also motivate me a lot...they are by side every time I want them....n we have completed four years together

Deepakshi,Mahima,Shivi,Siddhi,Kshma,Shreya,Kanishka
I wish we tie until we die.
Even after death we become ghosts and tie,
I wish even after death we tie.
Those memories together I wish they don't die,
I wish we tie until we die.
Kinshuk,Kartik,Ansh, Rajat, Abhay,Amit,Sahil,Yuvraj,
My brothers I wish we make the strongest bond.
I wish we tie until we die.
Time would pass but memories don't die,
I wish we die until we die.
Lunch during lectures,gossip while teachers teaching, punishment altogether, those morning assemblies.
I wish those memories remain after times flies.
I wish we tie until we die.
Akash and Tanmay of our class are smarties
They solve our fights and our the entertainers.
Deepakshi,Mahima,Kanishka thanks for this adorable friendship of yours.
Siddhi our fights big or small I am sorry for all.
Your friendship gave me many memories thanks for all.
Shivi your caring nature gave me to learn a lot,
Shruti in class I really miss you a lot.
Kshma I love your company sis,
And you will be very successful one day I know this.
Shreya you are a great companion
And a great chatter box.
I love your company a lot.
Kinshuk Amit your are the best brother I got,
and I really love you a lot.
Yuvi Rajat Abhay brothers thanks for the support I got,
And i really appreciate it a lot.
Kartik,Ansh in class you are really missed a lot,
Brothers I really love you a lot.
Thanks for this adorable friendship you all,
I really love it a lot.
I wish we tie until we die

Reviews

[Sofia]

I loved the repetition..without friends life would truly be colourless..they fill our lie with happiness..and you're so lucky you've got so many great friends..even they are very lucky to get you as a friend...this was really a great way for thanking your friends for everything...your poems are filled with so much emotions for your friends and teachers..keep writing :)

[pragya gaur]

Thanks dear

[look.both.ways]

Very nice! Such a sweet gesture to your friends! Good that you can put into words your relationship with them. Well done. :)

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot for the review

[Carol Cashes]

I, too, liked the repetition of "we tie until we die". Your devotion to your friends and each of their specific contributions to your life is commendable. Nicely done.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks ma'am

[Wajiha Nayeem]

aww.....so much of love towards your friends...they are really lucky...keep writing, keep loving.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot Wajiha ji

[Surya]

Hey...applauds for you, on your thought to praise ur frnds....i loved it...:)

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Surya ji

[Priyanshi]

Friends are the most important part of our life... They make us complete...that feel i can feel in your poem, it makes me smile.
Thanks for sharing, wonderful piece.
Always keep on writing.

[pragya gaur]

Thanks a lot priyanshi ji

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, dear.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Oh my gosh what a touching tribute to all of your dear friends and classmates Pragya! Great flow and word use. Great repetition " I wish we tie until we die."-heart-felt and so touching. Wonderful detail about each friend and good rhyme. Pragya you are a Shining Star!

[pragya gaur]

Thanks Annette Ji....if I am here today its just because a teacher and my classmates....and if I become something tomorrow then all the credit will go to them....how much I describe them and how much I praise them....its nothing in front of the lot they do for me

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

What a wonderful love you share with them! Beautiful!

[pragya gaur]

Plz give me suggestion on how to improve on