Archaic

I'll kiss you so hard 
that whenever you'll feel me against your soul
Your arms would collapse holding me
in such a way that it would leave your hunger
Insecure and restless!

Author's Note

Be honest!

Reviews

[costa siwale]

it's terse and powerful, words from true emotional expression. I enjoyed it

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou sooo much costa

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words are full of love. Very passionate, I liked it.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Najam!
I love it when I get appreciation from a great writer as you are :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for such appreviation. It means a lot.
It is my pleasure reading your works.

[Najam Us Saher]

Appreciation*

[Priyanshi]

I really love your work, sister ,as always... and the last two lines are amazing...
:))

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou dear Sweetheart.......

[Farhan Shaikh]

Strong words totally liked it

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Farhan

[Davidgeo]

You come on just a little bit too strong. (and creepy)

I assume you're an unregistered sex offender then?

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Hahahahahha
Roflmao
Well, I am a serial Killer

P.S. I only use my eyes ;) "To Kill"

[.]

I believe Coyote has summed up your poem with the right words. A write of passion. For kisses of the past and kisses of the future.

Nicely written.

[.]

Doodley, Ma'am.....Doodley.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Uhpps. sooo sorry

Yeah doodley :)

[¿]

Again honestly Pragati...it superb that too in just few lines!!
The expressions in this poem makes it go 🙆!!!
Nice read😊

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou Babe

:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You did a outstanding job. The words filled with passion and great emotions. Very nice use of words my friend.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Coyote :)
Keep reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Pragati.